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ali, It was really good, like it had a good idea and plot. Maybe lay off someof the details in the begging and change it up, use more details towards the end. Overall it was pretty good.
Thursday, March 19th, 2009 @ 9:18 pm
i THINK YOUR STORY WAS VERY INTERESTING. MY ATTENTION WASN’T REALLY GRABBED IN THE BEGIGINNG BUT YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITER
Thursday, March 19th, 2009 @ 10:05 pm
ali, It was really good, like it had a good idea and plot. Maybe lay off someof the details in the begging and change it up, use more details towards the end. Overall it was pretty good.